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Business and Technical English Writing ENG201
Spring 2021
Assignment No. 1
Total Marks: 20
Lectures: 1-15

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Q 1. In business communication, it is important to use appropriate language when writing a letter. It is necessary to use strong phrases and to avoid weak words. In the following list, each sentence contains some weak words commonly used in letter writing. Identify the weak word from each sentence and write it in the column below against the relevant number. (5 x 2 = 10 marks)
Note: Statement 1 has been solved for your reference and sample solution is provided in the table; follow its pattern to solve the rest of the statements.

1. We are sorry to inform you that the interview is a bit difficult to schedule.
2. So, it can be concluded that the product needs further refinement.
3. We can guarantee that this product gets attention.
4. We know that you are concerned about your stuff.
5. We can say that the perfect solution to our problem is that you provide us with the material.
6. The results of your argument obviously indicate that you are not interested in investing.

Sentence Number Answer (one word only)
1 sample solution A bit
2
3
4
5
6

Q 2. Suppose you are working as a website developer in a Software House, AEROTECH and you want to develop a new website for online teaching for Eagleton School System. Keeping in view the general structure mentioned below, you need to write a proposal to the Managing Director of your Software House.

• Introduction
• Body
• Conclusion
(4+3+3 = 10 marks)

[Ikram Khan]

ENG201 Assignment No.1 Solution: Question # 1

In business communication, it is important to use appropriate language when writing a letter. It is necessary to use strong phrases and to avoid weak words. In the following list, each sentence contains some weak words commonly used in letter writing, Identify the weak word from each sentence and write it in the column below against the relevant number.(10 marks) > We are sorry to inform you that the interview is a bit difficult to schedule. > So, it can be concluded that the product needs further refinement. > We can guarantee that this product gets attention. > We know that you are concerned about your stuff. >We can say that the perfect solution to our problem is that you provide us with the material. > The results of your argument obviously indicate that you are not interested in investing. Solution:
Sentence Number Answer ( one word only )
1 sample solution A bit
2 Can be
3 can
4 Your
5 With the
6 obviously
Question # 2 Suppose your are working as a website developer in a software house, AEROTECH and you want to develop a new website for online teaching for Eagleton School System . Keeping in view the general structure mentioned below, you need to write a proposal to the managing Director of your Software House. 1. Introduction 2. Body 3. Conclusion Solution: Note: Dear Teacher its just a sample of proposal so i haven’t mentioned the technical and costing information. Introduction Website Design Proposal Learn With Asad Managing Director Web Developer AEROTECH AEROTECH May 27 ,2021 Subject: I want to develop a new website for online teaching for Eagleton School System. Respected Managing Director, At AEROTECH, i hold one goal above all others: 100% clent satisfaction. My in-house team of web designers upholds the highest standards for project planning and execution, and we’re dedicated to building the perfect website on-budget. Body I’ve read all the customer requirements to build website. They want to develop a online teaching system. In this proposal, you’ll find examples of my past workalong with what we feel is the optimal solution for this website development needs, along with the associated delivery timeline, costs, and project terms. Conclusion As you know I’have developed many Online Education System for several Educational Insitutes with the great success, I can complete his project reliably. Once you’ve reviewed this proposal thoroughly, you’ll completely acknowledge that I’m the right person for this Project so simply electronically sign it at the bottom to indicate your approval so that I can start work on this project as early as possible.

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oh thanks for this help